74. Take a walk among the ghosts

Take a walk among the ghosts, her husband suggests.

So she walks onto the street where she is greeted by the ghost of every dead resident of the small miner’s town.



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14 thoughts on “74. Take a walk among the ghosts

  1. adjpants says:

    This is incredible!

  2. pandaplatter says:

    brilliant brilliant, how you sum it all up in a sentence at the end, and I know not particularly relevant to the story, but I enjoyed your use of the word tickertape! it is such a fantastic word

  3. b00kreader says:

    With an opening line like that I had no idea where we would end up, very well written twist.

  4. Tanya says:

    Hi, can you pass all your creative and writing skills to me? … You can’t? Well, at least I tried. Your stories are wonderful!

  5. I just got goosebumps from that…

  6. Iona Nerissa says:

    Wonderful chilling conclusion!

  7. VOID RPG Admin says:

    The ending was perfect. A great creative writing piece.

  8. Danny James says:

    Should know what to expect from you by now. WRONG! I thought the story was done after “But he already knows.” Good thing I scrolled down and caught the last line. Creepy!

  9. rosellezubey says:

    Another twisty story. I really love it, if it can be said that we love such a dark story.

  10. John says:

    Poor Tammy Lee … 😦

  11. As is the usual, great ending. I liked it.

  12. latash72 says:

    Nice! Shared on google+ and Twitter.

  13. Jashaél says:

    Whoa! I’m scratching my head because I don’t know what to say, sir! The “boom” at the end. Haha! Very well written.

  14. whoooaaaa! Pretty cool. =D

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