“Knock-knock.”
She loved knock-knock jokes. I played along.
“Who’s there?”
“An elf and a unicorn.”
She didn’t quite get these jokes yet. She was only six after all.
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WOW! As a writer – you can cure her???? Surely????
Loved it.
Brilliant. Way to play with your reader’s emotions. Very important and wonderfully executed.
Well goddamn that took a turn. So good
Extremely moving
Absolutely adorable. And heart-wrenching.
Love the surprises. If it’s okay with you, I’m going to attempt to flatter you with imitation; got an idea the other day while driving. Let me know what you think, it’ll be Monday’s post. (You don’t have to publish this comment, just wanted to let you know).
Very curious to read it… 🙂
If you haven’t had a chance, here it is… http://eff-five.com/2013/09/30/walk-of-shame/
That was quite the twist! I still can’t believe that ending…
Way to play at my heart strings! Beautiful story.
Jeez that ending hit me hard and unexpected. Your twist endings are amazing. Keep up the good work!
As Late Summer said, way to play at the heart strings. Cute little scene and then, bam! Well done=)
You sure know how to make a girl cry with the last line!!!!! ;(
This one has such a great twist, it felt like I’d been punched!
Beautiful!