Who’s going to miss him?
That was the last thought that raced through Ned’s head before aiming his shotgun at the burglar’s chest and pulling the trigger. The burglar was unarmed and the silent alarm assured the police would be here in minutes. But Ned shot him anyway. His privacy had been invaded. There had to be a price to pay.
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Oh man! The conscience never shuts up does it?! Love this story
Very well done. Yes did the right thing, but the opening line tells the whole story, “who’s going to miss him?” He should not have pulled the trigger with such an empathic thought.
Even when actions appear justified, the consequences can be brutal and lifelong. Very well told!
I liked this ever so much! Crisp, clear writing, and a good hook at the end. Well done!
Nice story
What a powerful study in psychology! Good writing.
Great story, and thanks for the follow!
Great story with shades of Poe-reminded me of his “The tell-tale heart” 🙂
Culling the herd. Ned must be a politician. ‘It was for the greater good.’
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Great opening line and a nice twist in the tail. I really enjoyed it.
Conscience. That’s what drives this mankind. That’s how it should be. Had never read a story before with such a powerful impact.
Good job. You pulled us along and then showing the truth in the very last line. Nice writing.
good little piece. I also loved the last line
I like it. Hidden remorse. Hidden depth. That last line brings in a whole new and unexpected layer, giving the reader a glimpse of the whole. Beautifully done.
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