216. Heads, she wins. Tails, I do

Heads, she wins. Tails, I do.

The coin flips.

 

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14 thoughts on “216. Heads, she wins. Tails, I do

  1. holy sh*t that’s powerful! Not the ending i was expecting, and THAT’S what makes your poem so brilliant.

  2. Tonya R. Moore says:

    Whimsical, I thought and then… the heartbreaking end. Neatly done.

  3. rockyfort says:

    The shock ending hit me. Great job of a serious subject.

  4. rockyfort says:

    Reblogged this on Ice Cream Castles in the Air and commented:
    It might not look like it at first, but this is an amazingly meaningful story! Check it out…

  5. Wow, this one really got to me. Just shows that only a few words can have a big impact.

  6. landl30 says:

    Whew… wow. What a great one line closer. Tight. Twist. Caught my breath… well done.
    Len Freeman
    poemsperday.com

  7. philsblog01 says:

    Perfect micro fiction!

  8. Sarah Ann says:

    That hurts. Well done on saying so much in so few words.

  9. rymimy says:

    Excellent. Short and bittersweet.

  10. toconnell88 says:

    Brutal piece. Great work.

  11. Hit me so hard, I now feel numb. Excellent writing.

  12. Sachita N. says:

    Reblogged this on Stuff Life Fun Etc….. and commented:
    And THATS what you call powerful writing……..

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