245. Peek-a-boo!

“Peek-a-boo!”

The baby is genuinely startled. His dad was gone just seconds ago.

Yet here I am again.

“Where is daddy then?”

I know what he’s thinking.

 

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13 thoughts on “245. Peek-a-boo!

  1. sandraconner says:

    Well, I wasn’t ready for that! Very effective writing.

  2. simonsylvester says:

    Top Ten – a brilliant story.

  3. fralyundone says:

    Had to read it a couple of times before it clicked and I love stories that make me go back and slow down to figure them out.

  4. jimmie g says:

    Well done, again.

  5. Kate Loveton says:

    Outstanding! Wonderful ending!

  6. Hahahaha that’s fun. I was all set to write a comment about how babies don’t have any sense of object permanency, but then you went and put in that awesome little twist at the end.

  7. OH NO! What a freaky (and awesome) ending! Well done. 😉

  8. W. K. Tucker says:

    I didn’t see that one coming…great story.

  9. b00kreader says:

    Again!?! Nice twist 🙂

  10. LeProsey says:

    Great ending…once again

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