141. Ann was short

Ann was short. Short in height. Short with words. Short on luck. Short on love.

Maximilian on the other hand displayed a longitude uncommonly seen in a variety of domains, most of them already mentioned in Ann’s description but not restricted to those, and excluding love, for it had been a very long time since he last had a girlfriend.

 

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8 thoughts on “141. Ann was short

  1. roshnikrish says:

    aaaaawwwwwwwwww…. short and sweet.. 🙂

  2. Francina says:

    Very well composed short story, and a fine write!
    Thank you for visiting my blog and the follow.
    groetjes, Francina

  3. I like Ann.

    As for Maximillian, I must say in spite of such loquaciousness, there may be hope for him after all.

  4. lorna likiza says:

    kinda romantic, dinner and all.

  5. aprilmilam says:

    Clever. I thoroughly enjoyed the long and short of it.

  6. Expressing the characters in structure as well as dialogue! As the previous commenter said, clever.

  7. Beaded Quill says:

    Great characterization through diction and sentence length. The twist at the end ties it all up delightfully.

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