173. A girl. Again.

A girl. Again.

The queen held the baby.

She was gorgeous.

Outside, the carpenter had already started on the scaffold.



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12 thoughts on “173. A girl. Again.

  1. This is stellar! I relate to it especially, coming from a very traditional Asian background 🙂

  2. Oh, yikes. So powerful in only so few words.

  3. nkbeaudry says:

    This is very grim, but awesome. You managed to tell an entire story in three sentences.

  4. Bruce Goodman says:

    LOL That was short and unsweet!

  5. A story in title + 3 sentences = such talent

  6. Geoff says:

    Perfect little story. 🙂

  7. azylia123 says:

    Powerful. Somehow, I like your stories with a dark theme a lot more than the others.

  8. I am a fan of the MicroStory “can fit in a tweet” format. Well done!

  9. kellygrowscomics says:

    Wow! I was going to say something like ‘That is really powerful’ but it looks like some others already did that! 😀

  10. Oh wow. Just a few sentences but they say so much.

  11. Chelsea says:

    This took me a second, but once I reread the title it hit me. Excellent. I especially like the use of punctuation in the title. It has a lot of impact.

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